[NCUC-EC] Fast Track Print Materials Request

[William Drake]

On Mar 22, 2013, at 5:48 PM, Edward Morris <edward.morris at ALUMNI.USC.EDU> wrote:

> Hi Bill,
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> A bit of nitpicking:
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> - Request Description, Question 1:
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> 'as well as an About NCUC bit with basic information and pointers to recent activities of note.'
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> I am unclear what this is. Do you mean NCUC newsletter? Perhaps a different word than 'bit' might be useful.

WOT, you live in the UK and you can't grok 'bit'?  Ok.. 
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> - Request Objectives, Question 2
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>    I'd suggest 'for the Constituency" rather than 'in the constituency'.
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>   I'd suggest 'the Issue Briefs would be calibrated' rather than 'the Issue Briefs could be calibrated'

Okydoky thanks.  

Otherwise the concept's ok?  
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> On Fri, Mar 22, 2013 at 4:34 PM, William Drake <william.drake at uzh.ch> wrote:
> Any comments out there before I send?
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