<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=iso-8859-1"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><br><div><div>On Mar 22, 2013, at 5:48 PM, Edward Morris <<a href="mailto:edward.morris@ALUMNI.USC.EDU">edward.morris@ALUMNI.USC.EDU</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite">Hi Bill,<div><br></div><div>A bit of nitpicking:</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>- Request Description, Question 1:</div><div><br></div><div>'as well as an About NCUC bit with basic information and pointers to recent activities of note.'</div>
<div><br></div><div>I am unclear what this is. Do you mean NCUC newsletter? Perhaps a different word than 'bit' might be useful.</div></blockquote><div><br></div>WOT, you live in the UK and you can't grok 'bit'? Ok.. <br><blockquote type="cite"><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>- Request Objectives, Question 2</div><div><br>
</div><div> I'd suggest 'for the Constituency" rather than 'in the constituency'.</div><div> </div><div> I'd suggest 'the Issue Briefs would be calibrated' rather than 'the Issue Briefs could be calibrated'</div></blockquote><div><br></div>Okydoky thanks. </div><div><br></div><div>Otherwise the concept's ok? <br><blockquote type="cite">
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On Fri, Mar 22, 2013 at 4:34 PM, William Drake <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:william.drake@uzh.ch" target="_blank">william.drake@uzh.ch</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
Any comments out there before I send?<br>
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