[NCUC-EC] Fast Track Print Materials Request

[Edward Morris]

Hi Bill,

A bit of nitpicking:


- Request Description, Question 1:

'as well as an About NCUC bit with basic information and pointers to recent
activities of note.'

I am unclear what this is. Do you mean NCUC newsletter? Perhaps a different
word than 'bit' might be useful.


- Request Objectives, Question 2

   I'd suggest 'for the Constituency" rather than 'in the constituency'.

  I'd suggest 'the Issue Briefs would be calibrated' rather than 'the Issue
Briefs could be calibrated'



Ed











On Fri, Mar 22, 2013 at 4:34 PM, William Drake <william.drake at uzh.ch> wrote:

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