[NCUC-EC] ncuc statement on transition (draft)

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi,

can we have a clean version of the statement so MAryam will publish it in
NCUC website and twitter account. also Milton can send it to relevant
parties.

Best.

Rafik

2016-06-24 6:08 GMT+09:00 Mueller, Milton L <milton at gatech.edu>:

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> 1.      I don't understand the three operational community business "Our
> members have been keen and engaged participants in the working groups,
> drafting teams and proposal development processes in* all three
> operational communities.*" I wondered what you meant by operational
> communities. and this link https://www.icann.org/en/stewardship/community
> says that operational communities are domain names, numbering resources and
> protocol parameters. If that is the case, have we been developing processes
> in all three operational communities or am I mistaken and don't understand
> operational communities ?
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> Some of our members participated in proposal development processes of
> other operational communities, (e.g., me in protocols and a bit in numbers
> in NA region, Avri in protocols, Seun in numbers)
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> 2.      You have three operational communities again in the last
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> OK with me to remove the words.
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> 3.      I find this sentence unnecessary : "*We note the approval of the
> proposed governance reforms by the independent reviewers commissioned by
> the NTIA". * Why are we noting this ? we could also say it's been
> approved by some aliens in Mars who were independent too!
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> Let’s add a statement about aliens, then. Vint Cerf is big on Mars. I
> agree I blame James Gannon for it being in there ;-)
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> 4.*"We note the approval of the proposed governance reforms". also in the
> same sentence we have governance reform. If you don't get rid of that
> sentence you might want to change it to accountability reforms. *
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