[NCUC-EC] Approving the operating procedures for NCUC

[hfaiedh ines]

Looks fine to me as well.

On Sep 11, 2017 15:49, "Renata Aquino Ribeiro" <raquino at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi
>
> I'm ok w/ approval too
> When this phase is over, perhaps additional work on the outreach form
> and strategy would be interesting and I'll share ideas soon
>
> Best
>
> Renata
>
> On Mon, Sep 11, 2017 at 1:02 AM, David Cake <dave at davecake.net> wrote:
> > There is some inconsistent hyphenation - e.g. is should be either NCUC
> EC or
> > NCUC-EC, but both occur. same issue with NCUC-PC and NCUC PC. Also  on
> > hyphens, I think high-priority should be high priority.
> >
> > i think this sentence "A NCUC-EC or an appointed NCUC appointees of NCSG
> PC
> > member should be tasked with putting this in the Trello and scheduling
> the
> > emails to the” is awkward and needs rephrasing. Is that supposed to be
> > ‘appointed NCUC appointee or NCSG-PC member’? In which case appointed is
> > redundant. (sentence is in top of page 2.
> >
> > I don’t think these suggested edits are substantial. Otherwise, the
> document
> > is in good shape.
> >
> > David
> >
> > On 11 Sep 2017, at 10:10 am, farzaneh badii <farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> > I have asked Maryam to fix some of the numbering of the document but at
> this
> > stage, no substantive changes will be made anymore and only editorial,
> > stylistic changes can take place.
> >
> > Best
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Farzaneh
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