<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">There is some inconsistent hyphenation - e.g. is should be either NCUC EC or NCUC-EC, but both occur. same issue with NCUC-PC and NCUC PC. Also on hyphens, I think high-priority should be high priority. <div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">i think this sentence "A NCUC-EC or an appointed NCUC appointees of NCSG PC member should be tasked with putting this in the Trello and scheduling the emails to the” is awkward and needs rephrasing. Is that supposed to be ‘appointed NCUC appointee or NCSG-PC member’? In which case appointed is redundant. (sentence is in top of page 2. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I don’t think these suggested edits are substantial. Otherwise, the document is in good shape. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">David<br class=""><div class=""><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 11 Sep 2017, at 10:10 am, farzaneh badii <<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com" class="">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I have asked Maryam to fix some of the numbering of the document but at this stage, no substantive changes will be made anymore and only editorial, stylistic changes can take place.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><font face="verdana, sans-serif" class="">Farzaneh </font></div></div></div></div>
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