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<body class='hmmessage'><div dir='ltr'><div>Dear Farz,</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks for your good work.</div><div>Based on the lated revised version, I have revised <span style="font-size: 12pt;">on my part.</span></div><div>Please see some minor edits in the document.</div><div>If any problem, please let me know.</div><div>Thanks very much.</div><div><br></div><div>Best</div><div>Peter<br><br><div><hr id="stopSpelling">From: milton@gatech.edu<br>To: farzaneh.badii@gmail.com<br>Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2016 03:28:53 +0000<br>Subject: Re: [NCUC-EC] The flyer<br>CC: ncuc-ec@lists.ncuc.org<br><br>
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">Looks good! There are a few typos here and there, mostly minor, like two spaces where there should be one</span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>farzaneh badii<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, January 3, 2016 6:31 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mueller, Milton L <milton@gatech.edu><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Exec. Comm <ncuc-ec@lists.ncuc.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [NCUC-EC] The flyer</span></p>
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Hi <BR>
I made the changes as you suggested. I think now it makes more sense and I also got rid of the description of domain name system. I primarily intended to mention domain name system because I have seen many fellows think that ICANN gets involved with the
governance of the Internet as a whole, for example providing infrastructure etc. I just wanted to clarify that it is limited. But I think with your explanation it is better now. <BR>
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I also made a change under the join us here "<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;">protecting noncommercial communications, activities and interests on the Internet." As our activities are within ICANN mission I added within ICANN so
that people don't think we are doing this outside of ICANN for the whole Internet. </span><BR>
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<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;">I also added this paragraph "</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;">By joining us you can have a real effect on making ICANN a more transparent and accountable corporation.
T<span style="color:#3F3F3F;">ogether we can represent the non-commercial users interests more strongly</span></span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3F3F3F;">." </span><BR>
<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#3F3F3F;">Let me know what you think </span><BR>
<span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;">I also updated the numbers. </span><BR>
I edited added "help" based on Bill's comment. <BR>
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Comments are appreciated.<BR>
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Farzaneh <BR>
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal">On 30 Dec 2015 04:30, "Mueller, Milton L" <<a href="mailto:milton@gatech.edu" target="_blank">milton@gatech.edu</a>> wrote:</p>
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">I have some problems with the ICANN part.
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">>The second level domain names consist of one top level domain name
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">> and a name which the user chooses for example: name.NET</span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">This is technically incorrect. A second-level name is a second-level name. This is referring to a full
domain name (SLD.TLD). Moreover, I question the value of trying to explain the DNS in a brochure. If someone really doesn¡¯t understand what a domain name is no brochure is going to fix it and they are unlikely to be getting involved in ICANN.</span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">>ICANN develops policies in order to administer the domain names as well as
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">> other technical aspects, and makes decisions regarding its mandate through
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">> a bottom up process that allows all the relevant stakeholder groups participate
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">> in policymaking.</span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">This description is part of ICANN¡¯s continuing pretense that it only does technical stuff. It should
read: </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">¡°ICANN develops policies related to how many top level domains there will be, which ones will exist,
to whom they will be assigned, and the regulations that apply to the entities that run them. Its policies are developed through a multistakeholder process.¡± </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">>ICANN currently performs its mission under a U.S. Government contract
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">> and is accountable to the global community under an Affirmation of Commitments.</span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></p>
<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;">This could be changing very soon. Do we want to put this obsolete info into a printed brochure?
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style=""><a name="15202d453ca4154b_151f2bf17d45b20f_151f0e" target="_blank"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;"> </span></a></p>
<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#434343;">> ICANN is currently engaged in a process of internationalization, with
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<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#434343;">> new hub offices and engagement centers opening around the world.
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<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#434343;"> </span></p>
<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;">This is junk, staff propaganda. We might say that ¡°ICANN is currently engaged in a process of globalization, ending unilateral U.S. government
oversight. ICANN has offices and engagement centers in different parts of the world.¡±
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<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;"> </span></p>
<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#434343;">> Information on ICANN¡¯s organization, governance, procedures, and
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<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#434343;">> range of activities is all available at</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;">
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<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F4E79;"> </span></p>
<p style=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;">On the brochure there is no URL following this, only an ICANN logo. At any rate, we should point people to our own web site not ICANN¡¯s, for further
information. </span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>farzaneh badii<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, December 28, 2015 9:37 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Exec. Comm <<a href="mailto:ncuc-ec@lists.ncuc.org" target="_blank">ncuc-ec@lists.ncuc.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [NCUC-EC] The flyer</span></p>
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style="">Hi all </p>
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style="">I have made changes to the ICANN part of the flyer. I think the flyer is for newcomers and it should be more simple. please let me know if you agree with this approach and feel
free to make suggestion. we also need a more recent picture.</p>
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style="">Best<br clear="all">
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<p class="ecxMsoNormal" style="">Farzaneh
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