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<p>Couple of edits for your consideration:</p>
<p>Outreach is one of NCUC's core activities through which we
provide information to noncommercial Internet users [<i>add: and
organizations?</i>] (our designated [<i>possibly a confusing
term - delete?</i>] community) about the work of NCUC and its
role in domain name policy making at ICANN. Outreach facilitates
the entry of the designated [<i>as above</i>]
community to policymaking processes at ICANN. Outreach brings the
diversity of views of noncommercial users to NCUC [<i>add:
enriching its membership and policy work</i>]. [<i>delete</i>:
and can prevent capture]. Outreach raises awareness about the
existence of NCUC and what we are working on at ICANN and how our
designated [<i>as above</i>] community can get involved with our
activities. [<i>Not sure about this part:</i> It will bring more
legitimacy to the process of policy development] and make our
participation more effective at ICANN. <br>
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Matthew <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 15/06/2017 06:15, Ayden Férdeline
wrote:<br>
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<blockquote type="cite"
cite="mid:Pl_ce8MCIN6sp7EgQOHPiPHvBKC6xV1ynGjMEzRyBIpkBBntC1FoYHecGT0HhVIdoXTVr5QT5dEDXTuTIRFKSldPjrme4w19u7l_R9_p3Z8=@ferdeline.com"> outreach
is one of NCUC's core activities through which we
provide information to noncommercial Internet users (our
designated community) about the work of NCUC and its role in
domain name policy making at ICANN. Outreach facilitates the entry
of the designated community to policymaking processes at ICANN.
Outreach brings the diversity of views of noncommercial users to
NCUC and can prevent capture. Outreach raises awareness about the
existence of NCUC and what we are working on at ICANN and how our
designated community can get involved with our activities. It will
bring more legitimacy to the process of policy development and
make our participation more effective at ICANN. </blockquote>
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Matthew Shears
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com">matthew@intpolicy.com</a>
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