<div dir="ltr"><div><div>Dear Nicolas,<br><br></div>I am attaching my revised version where in <span style="background-color:rgb(255,255,255)"><b>red</b></span> are my additions and words or sections i suggested to be removed are also shown. Please do review and let me know if you agree with the changes so that I process with making the final draft or the final layout depending on the feedbacks.<br><br></div><div>Best regards,<br></div><div>A<br></div><div><s><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""></span></s></div><s><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""></span></s><div><span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:107%;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""> </span></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><br>*<b>Arsène Tungali</b>*<br></div><i>Consultant Chargé de Communication et Plaidoyer</i><br></div><div>UNICEF RDC - Zone Est<br></div><div dir="ltr"><div><br></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div>
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Bonjour Arsène,<br>
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Si tu pouvais bien lire le document et souligner les endroits
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<div>Thanks to João Carlos R. Caribé, Nuno Garcia and
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<div>Please note that at <a href="http://www.ncuc.org/brochure/" target="_blank">http://www.ncuc.org/brochure/</a> we
now list who did what so as to emphasize the diverse
bottom up community-driven nature of this initiative
(other parts of ICANN get staff to do things like this),
which is of relevance inter alia in the context of the
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<div>I’ve seen drafts floated of Irish and French versions
but don’t know if these were updated and finalized as
per below. If someone is able to finalize do send to
Maryam and we’ll post. We also really an update of the
Spanish version for Buenos Aires, if there are any
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<div>It’s been great to see the enthusiasm and
engagement around translating the NCUC
brochure. Unfortunately, I’ve been really
swamped with other stuff of late and am not
sure whether the various folks working on
Chinese, French, Spanish, and Portuguese
versions consider themselves to be done or
it’s still in process. When you all are
indeed done (and sorry if I’ve left out anyone
involved in the Cc), please forward them in
Word and PDF to Maryam Bakoshi <a href="mailto:maryam.bakoshi@icann.org" target="_blank">maryam.bakoshi@icann.org</a>
and she will post them to <a href="http://www.ncuc.org/brochure/" target="_blank">http://www.ncuc.org/brochure/</a>.</div>
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<div>Before declaring yourselves done though,
can I ask one small favor? Amr has pointed
out to me that one small bit of language is
misleading and probably should be tweaked.
When Milton and I banged this out a couple
years ago in a rush to get it to ICANN for
printing before a meeting, we wrote in the
section "Who We Are” that "we have real voting
power in ICANN's bottom-up,
multistakeholder policymaking process,
including the opportunity to help elect
members of the GNSO Council and two members of
the ICANN Board of Directors.” “Help" seemed
like ok shorthand insofar as members who are
elected NCSG Councilors have engaged in
discussions with peers related to the two GNSO
board members. But in fact they only actually
vote for the one board member that represents
the NonContracted Parties House. The brochure
has been out there floating around for a
couple years and nobody ever pointed this out
until Amr raised it the other day, yikes.
What can I say, everyone makes mistakes. Too
busy to reread our own verbiage carefully…but
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<div>So may I ask that in translating, everyone
please fix this line to say "help elect
members of the GNSO Council and <b>one</b>
member of the ICANN Board of Directors.”
Maryam, could you please fix the English
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