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    Bon travail Arsène, merci.<br>
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    Your suggestions are mostly improvements. I'll clean it out sometime
    tonight and will send it back to you alone and we will be able to
    send the final one to Bill soon.<br>
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    Nicolas <br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 07/04/2015 10:46 AM, Arsène Tungali
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          you agree with the changes so that I process with making the
          final draft or the final layout depending on the feedbacks.<br>
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        <div>Best regards,<br>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">2015-04-07 15:25 GMT+02:00 Nicolas Adam
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            <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"> Bonjour Arsène,<br>
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              Si tu pouvais bien lire le document et souligner les
              endroits problématiques s'il y en a. <br>
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              Merci!<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
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                          Will appreciate to reccive the latest French
                          draft for my inputs.<br>
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                      <div class="gmail_quote">2015-04-07 13:41
                        GMT+02:00 William Drake <span dir="ltr"><<a
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                          <div style="word-wrap:break-word">Hello
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                            <div>Thanks to João Carlos R. Caribé, Nuno
                              Garcia and Rogerio Mariano.  </div>
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                            <div>Please note that at <a
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                              now list who did what so as to emphasize
                              the diverse bottom up community-driven
                              nature of this initiative (other parts of
                              ICANN get staff to do things like this),
                              which is of relevance inter alia in the
                              context of the ongoing GNSO Review
                              process.</div>
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                            <div>I’ve seen drafts floated of Irish and
                              French versions but don’t know if these
                              were updated and finalized as per below. 
                              If someone is able to finalize do send to
                              Maryam and we’ll post.  We also really an
                              update of the Spanish version for Buenos
                              Aires, if there are any volunteers.</div>
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                            <div>Best</div>
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                            <div>Bill</div>
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                                      <div>Hello</div>
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                                      <div>It’s been great to see the
                                        enthusiasm and engagement around
                                        translating the NCUC brochure. 
                                        Unfortunately, I’ve been really
                                        swamped with other stuff of late
                                        and am not sure whether the
                                        various folks working on
                                        Chinese, French, Spanish, and
                                        Portuguese versions consider
                                        themselves to be done or it’s
                                        still in process.  When you all
                                        are indeed done (and sorry if
                                        I’ve left out anyone involved in
                                        the Cc), please forward them in
                                        Word and PDF to Maryam Bakoshi <a
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                                        and she will post them to <a
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                                      <div>Before declaring yourselves
                                        done though, can I ask one small
                                        favor?  Amr has pointed out to
                                        me that one small bit of
                                        language is misleading and
                                        probably should be tweaked. 
                                        When Milton and I banged this
                                        out a couple years ago in a rush
                                        to get it to ICANN for printing
                                        before a meeting, we wrote in
                                        the section "Who We Are” that
                                        "we have real voting power in
                                        ICANN's bottom-up,
                                        multistakeholder policymaking
                                        process, including
                                        the opportunity to help elect
                                        members of the GNSO Council and
                                        two members of the ICANN Board
                                        of Directors.”  “Help" seemed
                                        like ok shorthand insofar as
                                        members who are elected NCSG
                                        Councilors have engaged in
                                        discussions with peers related
                                        to the two GNSO board members. 
                                        But in fact they only actually
                                        vote for the one board member
                                        that represents the
                                        NonContracted Parties House. 
                                        The brochure has been out there
                                        floating around for a couple
                                        years and nobody ever pointed
                                        this out until Amr raised it the
                                        other day, yikes.  What can I
                                        say, everyone makes mistakes. 
                                        Too busy to reread our own
                                        verbiage carefully…but we should
                                        have technically correct
                                        language.</div>
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                                      <div>So may I ask that in
                                        translating, everyone please fix
                                        this line to say "help elect
                                        members of the GNSO Council and
                                        <b>one</b> member of the ICANN
                                        Board of Directors.”  Maryam,
                                        could you please fix the English
                                        version as well?</div>
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                                      <div>Thanks</div>
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