<div dir="auto">Thanks for sharing with us your experience during ICANN 61. It's good to hear that people were so interested in working group activities and meetings. I look forward to the template that would serve as a guide for drafting comments. Maybe there should be a collaboration exercise lead by those who participated onsite from the African group to help shaping our drafting skills.<div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Regards. </div><div dir="auto">Peter.</div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Fri, Apr 6, 2018, 10:16 PM Farell FOLLY <<a href="mailto:farell@benin2point0.org" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">farell@benin2point0.org</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-space">Dear All,<div><br></div><div>I participated in the previous ICANN conference as NCUC fellow. Please see in attach my draft report. I would like to share it with you so that you can give me hints to improve it. Don’t hesitate to comment, give suggestions or correcting/rephrasing bad words or phrasing. It will help me also improve my English writing.</div><div><br></div><div>I drafted two versions, one in French and the second in English.</div><div><br></div><div><div>FR pour les francophones: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/130UyM9mfUj5ijd96Y1O5vV7WjC0kNuIcucL3LkyDzdA/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/130UyM9mfUj5ijd96Y1O5vV7WjC0kNuIcucL3LkyDzdA/edit?usp=sharing</a>   </div><div>EN: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eIxZf2HVbJHA9mk8n_jxiYREoLi73OTeLrVOUwbMimk/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eIxZf2HVbJHA9mk8n_jxiYREoLi73OTeLrVOUwbMimk/edit?usp=sharing</a> </div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Merci d’avance.</div><div><br></div><div>
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